Prayer Poem #1

So I've been inspired recently to try writing some prayers in a sort of (in theory) poetic style. This is my first draft of my first attempt. Hopefully this isn't a horrendously pretentious thing to do!

Here goes...

Magnitudes may strike me down.

But I will hold strong to the One whose magnitude is too great for me to comprehend.

Whose might too powerful for me to truly know.

The One whose voice called creation into being and whose love for me sent His perfect Son to die a sinners death in my place.

In Him I put my trust, my life, my soul, my all.